Thursday, April 21, 2011

Whats bad about my paper


Whats bad about my paper?
So...I'm a terrible writer. For Honors English I needed to write a paper that connects a news article to the book, The Curious Incident of The Dog in the Night-Time Article for the Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time:http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2006/07/19/earlyshow/main1817689.shtml Basically about a boy who's blind that learns how to see with echolocation. My terrible paper: The news article “How a Blind Teen ‘Sees’ With Sound” relates to the book The Curious Incident of the dog in the night-time in various ways. Christopher and the boy from the article, Ben Underwood, both want to be independent and not doubted. They both strive to have they’re abilities used to their full potential. Both of them work hard to get what they want. One similarity is that Christopher and Ben both accomplished something unthinkable and amazing. Christopher found his mother, going through an extremely populated city. He made it into the math class he wanted, and he found out the murderer of Wellington all on his own. Ben can play video games, roller skate, play foosball and win in a pillow fight. Ben is blind, and has been since cancer took his sight at the age of two. Another similarity is that neither of them gave up. For most children, they might give up or be discouraged. Some might isolate themselves or become depressed, but instead they found a solution. For Christopher his teachers and principal said that he couldn’t go into the A-Level math. But instead of just giving up there, he took his test to prove he deserved to be in it. When Ben lost his sight, he worked to compensate for his disability. He learned how to use echolocation so he could be independent. Lastly, Christopher and Ben both had supportive parents. Ben’s mother never held him back, or was overprotective. When most mothers might shelter their children with that sort of disability, and that could harm their learning experience. She let him have independence and helped him have freedom. Christopher’s father was always behind him with any challenge he wanted to take on. He went to the school to plead Christopher’s case to the board when he wanted to take the math class. He fought for custody against his ex-wife, he searched night and day for Christopher when he ran away. Having supportive parents when you have a disability is important so that the child can grow and take care of themselves. Ben Underwood could accomplish much more than any person would think. Christopher Boone knows more than any one could tell. Both of them can have a free life now. It would be helpful if I could know whats bad I'll answer any question in return!...Thank you!
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The fact that you wrote it.